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Boliner is coming from Germany. She has been born in a town just outside Bolin. Every morning she has to get up from her bed very early to go to work. So, both of she and her husband do not want to do housework. Sometimes her kid is alone in the house as all her parents are at work. At evening, he sometimes asks for watching television.
Her husband has some strange habit. While he is writing a letter, he always scratch his chin. Boliner has some habits too. For example, she spent a very large number of money yesterday.  Boliner's parents have some strange habits too. They are living in down-town. But, German elders usually choose live in sheltered accommodation, since there are many people without homes, jobs and family.
She has learned English many years ago. And she behaves always like a American. But sometimes she ask some strange questions. For instance, Could you tell me why were you doing that？ Both the five men are hard workers. Does Jenny has a good friend? or She asks me what does he do in the morning, ect.

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